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    Jeremor
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    Post by Jeremor on Thu Jun 12, 2014 7:01 pm

    So, yeah, figured it might be nice to have a place to store my poetry and stuff. Keep it nice and orderly. For that reason, I'd like to ask people to not post in this thread. Shoot me a PM, or post in the Critiquing thread I might probably maybe make sometime down the line. Thanks yall.




    Black Heart

    The galaxy has a black heart.
    Blame the sky not to fall,
    gravity tugs on us all
    crushing us so small.
    The galaxy has a black heart.
    Tame the stars across the sky
    just so that you could fly,
    sometimes I wonder why
    The galaxy has a black heart.
    Claustrophobia is setting in,
    time stops before you win,
    does it matter when?
    The galaxy has a black heart.
    Nothingness is all I feel
    floating free, is this real?
    Let's make a deal.
    The galaxy has a black heart.
    Black heart of the galaxy.
    Black-hearted galaxy.



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